Nice, a bit long though, introduction Anexi! I really liked your speech, it seems as if you were giving a real live speech talking to real people in front of you. Well done!
Nice Anexi! Very clever introduction, it really grabs a hold of your attention. I especially liked your reference to the fighter and ending the video by saying "the fight is not over until its over." That was very inspiring to your viewers. Great work!
Wow, very engaging introduction. However, I believe it was a bit long and will result in losing your audience’s attention. In the end I thought your discussion was personal and engaging for your audience.
Nice catchy intriduction, earlier I thought I started a wrong video. May be at some point, I would like to know how did you match the company video with your's.
I felt your speech is mostly inspiring and shows that you are the type of CEO who roll the sleeves and work hard.
Very creative with the introducton Anexi! I think it was great.. I like the analagy with the fighter. As an employee it would encourage me to stick with you for better times.
Anexi, I really liked how you integrated the introduction from General Dynamics. The introduction definitely grabs the audience's attention. I think the length of the introduction may end up working against you as it becomes a bit overwhelming and may lose the audience's attention after a while. However, if you were able to shorten the intro to somewhere between 15 and 30 seconds, I think it would be fantastic.
You message was delivered very enthusiastically and will certainly keep the audience's attention.
Anexi, when I read you script, I felt it read a little rough. When I watched you deliver it, the rough spots evened out. You did a good job with vocal tone. Keep working on written English.
Nice, a bit long though, introduction Anexi! I really liked your speech, it seems as if you were giving a real live speech talking to real people in front of you. Well done!
ReplyDeleteNice Anexi! Very clever introduction, it really grabs a hold of your attention. I especially liked your reference to the fighter and ending the video by saying "the fight is not over until its over." That was very inspiring to your viewers. Great work!
ReplyDeleteWow, very engaging introduction. However, I believe it was a bit long and will result in losing your audience’s attention. In the end I thought your discussion was personal and engaging for your audience.
ReplyDeleteNice catchy intriduction, earlier I thought I started a wrong video. May be at some point, I would like to know how did you match the company video with your's.
ReplyDeleteI felt your speech is mostly inspiring and shows that you are the type of CEO who roll the sleeves and work hard.
Like the introduction. I never would have had the gutts to go on UTube - good for you!
ReplyDeleteVery creative with the introducton Anexi! I think it was great.. I like the analagy with the fighter. As an employee it would encourage me to stick with you for better times.
ReplyDeleteAnexi, I really liked how you integrated the introduction from General Dynamics. The introduction definitely grabs the audience's attention. I think the length of the introduction may end up working against you as it becomes a bit overwhelming and may lose the audience's attention after a while. However, if you were able to shorten the intro to somewhere between 15 and 30 seconds, I think it would be fantastic.
ReplyDeleteYou message was delivered very enthusiastically and will certainly keep the audience's attention.
You can setup a link on you tube for "video available for users with link"... Well so far no one at my job said "hey i saw you on you tube!!!!"
ReplyDeleteAnexi, when I read you script, I felt it read a little rough. When I watched you deliver it, the rough spots evened out. You did a good job with vocal tone. Keep working on written English.
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